the blood grew violent 
in the seeded pear, trillions of mysteries 
coalesced into form 
if there was a word 
that became flesh, it was shine or glory 
or let’s flower 
let’s generate power like magnolias 
blooming among the minefields 
and like that, a pencil 
worked under furious light, thoughts 
stirred in the cranial womb, vigilant
for the right milk, the exact pond 
feeding so many villagers already  
the air clung unnatural, and then 
there you were, among sassafras and existence
taking in the odors of ink and dust 
the sober architecture of stanzas stiffening
until we were strong enough 
to vandalize the night 
with a first read, a privilege  
to praise your exodus 
from this bag of electric salt
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Weekly Scribblings #32: I Am Explaining A Few Things
I don't think that my writing is quite at that stage yet!
ReplyDeleteI especially love this line:
ReplyDelete"there you were, among sassafras and existence" ~
Agreed!
DeleteLove this especially; "and like that, a pencil worked under furious light, thoughts stirred in the cranial womb, vigilant for the right milk." Thank you so much for writing to the prompt!💘
ReplyDeleteWow, what a dramatic genesis! (Now I'm wishing for poems that can feed whole villages.)
ReplyDeleteWOW, your imagery is dynamite
ReplyDeleteMuch💝love
Magnolias blooming in minefields ~~~~ Yes. Your poem is deep and thoughtful.
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