“Seduction, during the Dust Bowl, was a handful of polished shells, maybe a white shoulder twinkling at the collarbone.” - Julie Haas, Consumed Moon: The Eclipse of Retail
work the perfume counter
usher the blue-hairs towards their familiar scents
swish your arm to showcase
the possibilities, the unbelievable
within a wallet’s reach, they will drop
to their knees before the altar
under armour
hot topic
radio shack
hobby lobby
at the strip mall plaza
pantheon, they will drop
by the Painted Mirth and strike out
in their Royal Flesh foundation
blending sponge and blush
let them consume themselves
at the public mirror-brush brush swish and brush
lucky brand
dollar general
game stop
banana republic
the old toil of harvest, of setting the sill logs
is fading from our knuckles, so work
the register at The Forgotten Pallete, roll
those dented cans of low-sodium lentils across the red lasers, beep
beep and scan, dream on, and beep and scan
home depot
tractor supply
foot locker
american eagle
here at Tale of Lamps, we aim to light up the lives
of every person who walks through those doors, give
them the best possible lighting solutions for all
their home or office needs, be it in the bed,
in the bath, or beyond
they must confuse
merchandise for charm
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dVerse - Poetics: The charms of Samuel Greenberg
apologies to The Pale Impromptu
Incisively rendered in such a perfect and pleasing format. We'll all be branded before it's all over.
ReplyDeleteI love the shape and message of this poem! I imagined the girl at the perfume counter selling the blue-hairs dreams. I enjoyed the jazziness of lines like:
ReplyDelete‘hot topic
radio shack
hobby lobby’
mixed with the images of women ‘blending sponge and blush’.
The final lines are so true.
Very well done. I especially enjoyed:
ReplyDelete'the old toil of harvest, of setting the sill logs
is fading from our knuckles...'
I sense we are losing our connection with the past.
really loved this poem - you used Greenberg's words to good effect and then took off with your own charms. This deserves to be read again and again - aloud too!
ReplyDeletethank you for joining in with the prompt
Consumerism and plastic create a surreal world!
ReplyDeleteThis is worth a countless readings!💝
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