the blood grew violent
in the seeded pear, trillions of mysteries
coalesced into form
if there was a word
that became flesh, it was shine or glory
or let’s flower
let’s generate power like magnolias
blooming among the minefields
and like that, a pencil
worked under furious light, thoughts
stirred in the cranial womb, vigilant
for the right milk, the exact pond
feeding so many villagers already
the air clung unnatural, and then
there you were, among sassafras and existence
taking in the odors of ink and dust
the sober architecture of stanzas stiffening
until we were strong enough
to vandalize the night
with a first read, a privilege
to praise your exodus
from this bag of electric salt
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Weekly Scribblings #32: I Am Explaining A Few Things
I don't think that my writing is quite at that stage yet!
ReplyDeleteI especially love this line:
ReplyDelete"there you were, among sassafras and existence" ~
Agreed!
DeleteLove this especially; "and like that, a pencil worked under furious light, thoughts stirred in the cranial womb, vigilant for the right milk." Thank you so much for writing to the prompt!💘
ReplyDeleteWow, what a dramatic genesis! (Now I'm wishing for poems that can feed whole villages.)
ReplyDeleteWOW, your imagery is dynamite
ReplyDeleteMuch💝love
Magnolias blooming in minefields ~~~~ Yes. Your poem is deep and thoughtful.
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